Hello! I've really been enjoying this story. The first part is suuuper sad, omg, but there's so little random fluff around. Like, most of the words are there for a reason, to illustrate a point, which makes the reading pretty awesome. And freaking intense. I had to leave the computer a few times to go pace around and collect myself. And remember to breath.
The first scene was especially painful (in a good way!) to read. I love how you start the story with what felt like a punch to the face. And the tension doesn't really ever drop. Moving on to the next chapter now :) I hope it has some happy scenes!
(Oh man I wish I had a dreamwidth account. Am sorry I'm posting as anon, but yeah this story was posted a while ago so the comment's probably way too late to really matter.)
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Date: 2011-10-30 09:45 am (UTC)The first scene was especially painful (in a good way!) to read. I love how you start the story with what felt like a punch to the face. And the tension doesn't really ever drop. Moving on to the next chapter now :) I hope it has some happy scenes!
(Oh man I wish I had a dreamwidth account. Am sorry I'm posting as anon, but yeah this story was posted a while ago so the comment's probably way too late to really matter.)